Here are my thoughts about your graphic novel character- - The pose is much more dyanmic than before, which is good. I am not crazy about her expressions though. i am not really getting a good read on her personality. Much of this is in the eyes, which are very flat and devoid of emotion. The front-on shot of the face seems liek she is crossed-eyed, is this intentional? Is it part of her character?
- I definitely get the sense that she is tough, but don't feel like she has enough femininity to read as female at first glance. Not saying she had to have big boobs or luscious eyelashes or anything like that, just more feminine proportions.
- When it comes to circular forms, your linework lacks confidence. The On/Off plate seems a bit sloppy (make sure you put as much effort into the small stuff if it is going to play a big role in the presentation), as well as the helmet on the side shot. Those "things" are still part of her world, and deserve attention.
- I would have liked to see her riding the bike, or see an additional standing pose expressing more of her attitude.
Attention to detail is pretty good, and is appropriate for a comic character.
I also dig your Bogeyman re-interp. He has a lot of personality.
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John -
Here are my thoughts about your graphic novel character-
- The pose is much more dyanmic than before, which is good. I am not crazy about her expressions though. i am not really getting a good read on her personality. Much of this is in the eyes, which are very flat and devoid of emotion. The front-on shot of the face seems liek she is crossed-eyed, is this intentional? Is it part of her character?
- I definitely get the sense that she is tough, but don't feel like she has enough femininity to read as female at first glance. Not saying she had to have big boobs or luscious eyelashes or anything like that, just more feminine proportions.
- When it comes to circular forms, your linework lacks confidence. The On/Off plate seems a bit sloppy (make sure you put as much effort into the small stuff if it is going to play a big role in the presentation), as well as the helmet on the side shot. Those "things" are still part of her world, and deserve attention.
- I would have liked to see her riding the bike, or see an additional standing pose expressing more of her attitude.
Attention to detail is pretty good, and is appropriate for a comic character.
I also dig your Bogeyman re-interp. He has a lot of personality.
Cool stuff!
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