Hey guys, ive started painting and cleaning up my sketches into something slightly more understandable. Lemme know what you think so far. Mostly right now im working with the color palette and trying to get the images to jive as a diptych. Sean already made the suggestion to make sure the old ladys hair style/head shape, stay similar enough that you recognize her better. so that should be one change i make. Any who, lemme know, any help is always good!
Taylor
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I feel like you could get even brighter and deeper with the colors in the second one, especially since the lighting looks like (to me) that it's dusk/evening, so the sun is giving off little light, and her friend emits a glow, but since he's floating in a darkened place, there would be more glaring differences between the surfaces that have light hitting them, and those that don't. Of course, if that wasn't your intent, you can ignore everything I just said.
I think the compositions are nice, I like your idea of having the light source originate from a "single area", if that makes sense. You probably already know this, but in the second piece, Adelheit (that is her name, right) should definitely be the most solid, saturated figure - since her signature color is read, she could get lost in all the blood and guts. But these are all nit-picky things. Good going.
Oh, sorry to double post, but I forgot to mention: I like both of the palettes overall, I just want them to be even brighter. But if it doesn't work, you can just ignore me then
Brighter as in saturated? higher contrast or more light?
thks for the comments to super helpful
Both.
already applying, many thanks Julia (i almost typed Julius)
<3
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