I really like the color flats. I think the values are great in the image and all his little parts and bits stand out on their own. He looks really fun and i think hes really successful. The only super nitpicky stuff i feel like i could say, is the corners of the cream background. Its just a display thing, but they don't look sharp enough, or precise enough to really give them that pop finish. Its something small but would help perfect him just a touch more.
Great work on this guy Cailin. I really love the line-work, it is very expressive and fun. I love all of the little details, but I also think you managed to make him pretty readble from a distance.
The colors on his face could be more vibrant, right now it is hard to focus in on his face, which in a piece like this, should be the focal point.
The storyboard is pretty good, although I am finding it hard to read what is going on in some of the panels. Try to keep your lines as clean, especially when dealing with a shot that is from a distance.
Nice work all around. Sorry we didn't get to it in class that time, but thanks for posting. See you tomorrow.
Nice lines in the character work. I'm in agreement with Sean; a way for a viewer to focus via your use of color would help them understand the most important things about him. I mean, since the linework is solid, then it's okay to use color to carry some of the weight of your work (but it's not okay to rely on color exclusively, unless you're a color field painter/abstractionist or something). But he's cool, he's rad, and also, I like the way the wolves stay on his back: they're holding hands. How sweet.
Also, I think the story you presented is fine - having numbers on all of the panels might help, since you gave the panels in an unconvential format. Humans in the US are trained to read left to right, then up to down. I know you numbered the columns, but either arranging it horizontally, or numbering the panels, would facilitate a better "flow" to the reading. But other than that, cool beans.
Film character, had him tacked on the wall but we didn't get to him that night.
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I really like the color flats. I think the values are great in the image and all his little parts and bits stand out on their own. He looks really fun and i think hes really successful. The only super nitpicky stuff i feel like i could say, is the corners of the cream background. Its just a display thing, but they don't look sharp enough, or precise enough to really give them that pop finish. Its something small but would help perfect him just a touch more.
Great stuff and i really like the line work.
Great work on this guy Cailin. I really love the line-work, it is very expressive and fun. I love all of the little details, but I also think you managed to make him pretty readble from a distance.
The colors on his face could be more vibrant, right now it is hard to focus in on his face, which in a piece like this, should be the focal point.
The storyboard is pretty good, although I am finding it hard to read what is going on in some of the panels. Try to keep your lines as clean, especially when dealing with a shot that is from a distance.
Nice work all around. Sorry we didn't get to it in class that time, but thanks for posting. See you tomorrow.
Nice lines in the character work. I'm in agreement with Sean; a way for a viewer to focus via your use of color would help them understand the most important things about him. I mean, since the linework is solid, then it's okay to use color to carry some of the weight of your work (but it's not okay to rely on color exclusively, unless you're a color field painter/abstractionist or something). But he's cool, he's rad, and also, I like the way the wolves stay on his back: they're holding hands. How sweet.
Also, I think the story you presented is fine - having numbers on all of the panels might help, since you gave the panels in an unconvential format. Humans in the US are trained to read left to right, then up to down. I know you numbered the columns, but either arranging it horizontally, or numbering the panels, would facilitate a better "flow" to the reading. But other than that, cool beans.
thank you for the feedback, everyone :)
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