What if you Did something more like this Kat?

I remember in class that Sean wanted you to zoom out and see more of the boardwalk, give it a funky entrance and don't feel afraid to let it go TOTALLY overboard, I mean GOLD and RED and all sorts of gaudy decorations, streamers and flags and lanterns! put 'em all over the place! I don't mean that you need to make the image bigger, just zoom the perspective out so that we can see more!... also feel free to disregard pretty much everything I added to your image. I just wanted to make a point about the perspective